mirrorize All found & lost used to identity I am / i am lost. i am lost inside [ all-these-machines ] / i am used. _________________________________ Above is an excerpt of my poem " mirrorize ", which was written and published by ©Tiina Hölli 14.01.2016 at 23:00. I will dismantle first 2 rows / one sentence in one of my poems in my Writer -blog. ( note : it can be dismantled also otherwise, if these first 2 rows are not thought of belonging together as a sentence, and simultaneously also connected as the first line, that is, forming thus a sentence. To make it simpler I will present only this one dismantling of this poem´s beginning. ) I will do dismantling here, outside of Writer, in AIR BORNE, so that the other poems won't get scared. And i will do it for now only this once, and only for these first rows so that somebody who is not so familiar in my rythm will understand and know me better and know how to be & do with me and you know who you are am talking here so pay attention now. Rythm - very essential in life. And love. Mostly my poetical rythm is Very simple. But it flickers swiftly as I am flickery swift too. Most of my poems are ment to and can be read out loud as rythmical, expressive performances, and they are born to be a word play, fun to read out loud and fit the mouth. The idea is, that as one reads the words out loud, it becomes unclear to one, whether the meaning of what one just oneself to oneself read ( as seeing the words ) and simultaneously saying it out loud ( as heard what is said ) is actually in what one simultaneously suddenly realizes ( - like another person inside awakens - ) as all the other meanings of those words come simultaneously to mind. : ) ( Some of my poems are more complex. ) 1 All found & lost used to identity = All found and lost used to identity in general "lost & found" -items (idiom) to build her identity, but there is something wrong in the picture, because it is done in reversed order ( mirrorized). 2 ( Also if reader reads the 5 poems in this series from reversed order, it is more obvious what for I was giving clues here with the top headline, the toppest headline "Mirrorized". ) 3 All found & lost used to identity = All found and lost used to identity = she used all her "lost & foundlings", "lost & found" -items (idiom) to build her identity, but there is something wrong in the picture, because it is done in reversed order ( mirrorized). 4 All found & lost used to identity = All found and lost used to identity = all her "lost & foundlings", "lost & found" -items (idiom) are familiar with her identity, but there is something wrong in the picture, because it is done in reversed order ( mirrorized). 5 All found & lost used to identity All found - and lost used to identity = all was found ! hooray and all that was lost was used to built her identity 6 All found & lost used to identity All found - and lost used to identity = all was found ! hooray and then she got mentally or emotionally lost in her boredom, being used to her own identity, in her identity crisis 7 All found & lost used to identity All found & lost - used to identity = all was found and then it was all lost while she was familiar with her identity 8 All found & lost used to identity = all was found and then it was all lost while she was using it all to build her identity 9-10 All found & lost used to identity All -(found&lost)- used to identity = all was first found and then lost - that which was found and then lost was used to identity (being eaten or similar benefiting functions) = all was first found and then lost - all that was found and then lost was used to ( familiar with ) her identity 11 - 14 All found & lost used to identity I am = all cases 1 - 10 above but adding "I am" to the end of it I am = confirming that she actually is used to her identity = confirming that she is relating with her identity, yes = corfirming that she is using all she can get her hands into to build her identity and that she is still doing it as we speak = confirming that she is her identity = confirming that she is the identity she is and so on [ and then of course it becomes interesting, when you add / i am lost. i am lost inside [ all-these-machines ] / i am used. as a sentence after all these already flickering meanings, and dismantle these new words. ] [ in your head while reading out loud ] There may be more meanings that I might have overlooked. I will check on this later to see what i've missed. I expect approximately half. This makes my head spin too much so I will stop now |
Dismantling Written and published by ©Tiina Hölli 20.01.2016 at 23:50
Went thru it once again and made some corrections. 21.01.2016 21:21
I got so bored with this one and this open-statistics-like dismantling process but I guess you got the idea in general so I'm done with this 22.01.2016 16:20